The annotations below are for
texts presented by Helen Sykes to three sessions at the Whitlam Library, on the
19th, 20th and 25th November 2014.
Those who attended the sessions
were given the following handout, which highlighted the types of text presented.
Note: In the handout that was
given to teachers on the 19th and to students on the 20th, T. S. Eliot's poem
'The Journey of the Magi' was included in the list of related texts. While this
is certainly an interesting exploration of the concept of discovery, it cannot
be used as a related text as it is a prescribed text for HSC English.
Choosing related texts
- Choose quality texts - texts of substance that ensure that you have something to write about
- Choose texts that give you an opportunity to discuss language features and conventions
- Choose a variety of types of texts
- Choose related texts that are of a different text type to your prescribed text
- Choose texts with similar ideas to those in your prescribed text
- Choose texts with contrasting ideas to those in your prescribed text.
Note:you cannot use as a related text any text that is
prescribed for the HSC, even if it is prescribed for a course different from
the one you are doing.
An Overview of the Texts
This overview lists the texts under types. Below you will find, in alphabetical order, annotations on each of the texts.
Some picture books
Dragonquest
by Allan Baillie and Wayne Harris. Walker Books, 2012 (1996).
It's
a Book by Lane Smith. Walker Books, 2010.
Luke's
Way of Looking by Nadia Wheatley and Matt Ottley. Walker Books, 2012
(1999).
Rules of Summer
by Shaun Tan. Lothian Books, 2013.
Sounds Spooky
by Christopher Cheng and wSarah Davis. Random House Australia, 2011.
The Sweetest Fig
by Chris Van Allsburg. Andersen Press, 1993.
This
is Not My Hat by Jon Klassen. Candlewick Press, 2012.
The
Watertower by Gary Crew and Steven Woolman. Era Publications, 1997
(1994).
Some graphic novels
Coraline:
The graphic novel based on the novel by Neil Gaiman,
adapted and illustrated by P. Craig
Stormbreaker:
The graphic novel based on the novel by Anthony
Horowitz, adapted by Antony
Some young adult novels
The
Boy in the Striped Pyjamas by
John Boyne. Red Fox, 2006.
The
Interrogation of Ashala Wolf by Ambelin Kwaymullina. Walker Books.
2012
The Fault in Our Stars by John Green. Penguin Books, 2012.
Girls Don’t Fly by Kristen Chandler. Penguin Books,
2011.
Liar
by Justine Larbalestier. Allen & Unwin, 2011 (2009).
Looking
for Alibrandi by Melina Marchetta. Puffin, 1992.
The Vanishing Moment by Margaret Wild. Allen & Unwin, 2013.
We Were Liars by E. Lockhart. Allen & Unwin, 2014.
Some adult novels
Past
the Shallows by Favel Parett. Hachette, 2013 (2011).
The Reluctant Fundamentalist by Mohsin Hamid. Penguin Books, 2008
(2007).
Some classic novels
Emma
by Jane Austen.
Great
Expectations by Charles Dickens.
Silas
Marner by George Eliot.
Some non-fiction texts
Book
by John Agard, illustrated by Neil Packer. Walker Books, 2014.
The
Explorers by Tim Flanagan. Text Classics, 2013 (1998).
The
Fiftieth Gate by Mark Raphael Baker. HarperCollins, 1997.
My
Place by Sally Morgan. Fremantle Press, 1988.
Paula
by Isabel Allende. HarperCollins, 2005.
Scurvy
by Stephen R. Bown. Penguin, 2004 (2003).
Some short stories
'Alien' by Nadia Wheatley. Available in Ten Out of Ten, Phoenix Education.
'Mrs. Sen's'.
Available in Interpreter of Maladies
by Jhumpa Lahiri.
'Vici' by Naomi Novik. Available in The Dragon Book edited by
Jack Dann and Gardner Dozois.
Some poems
'Beach Burial' by Kenneth Slessor
'Five Visions of Captain Cook' by Kenneth Slessor.
'My Last Duchess' by Robert Browning
Some plays
Forget Me Not by Tom Holloway. Currency Plays, 2013.
The
Importance of Being Earnest by Oscar Wilde. A play in three acts.
A television documentary
First
Contact presented by Ray Martin and produced by Blackfella Films.
2014. Rated M.
Some films
Emma
directed by Jim O'Hanlon. 2009. Rated G.
The
Invention of Lying directed by Ricky Gervais and Matthew
Robinson. 2009. Rated M.
Longitude
directed by Charles Sturridge. 2000. Rated M.
The
Truman Show directed by Peter Weir. 1998. Rated PG.
The texts in more detail
'Alien'
by Nadia Wheatley. Available in Ten Out of Ten, Phoenix Education, ISBN 9781876580483.
This is an appealing story about a teenager whose family
have recently undergone a sea change, moving from the city to a small seaside
town. The story is told in the teenager's voice and the title, 'Alien',
expresses the sense of being an outsider that most teenagers who have had to
change towns and schools will recognise. The story gives a vivid description of
the town as a warm, welcoming place, which makes the sense of alienation even
more acute. In contrast to that sense of alienation, the narrator's parents
have immersed themselves happily in every aspect of community life.
The reading of this story involves a different kind of
discovery from the other texts suggested here. It's a discovery on the part of
the reader - and it only happens when you've finished reading the story and
begin talking about it with others. Some readers will begin confidently talking
about what 'she' felt and did; others will tentatively question how they've
come to the conclusion that the narrator is female. Arguments begin, including
the stereotype that 'She must be female. Look at the fuss she makes about her
appearance'. For most readers it is an interesting discovery that they have
made assumptions based on such stereotypes. Closer reading shows that there is
absolutely no way of knowing the narrator's gender; Wheatley has cleverly
structured her story so that it is never revealed.
There is another discovery, on the part of the narrator. His
or her parents are both deaf. We've been told that school friends have often
thought that strange, but it has always been part of the family life and has come
to seem quite normal:
No,
I don't mind that Mum and Dad are deaf. That doesn't get in the way at all. But
sometimes I do mind that they worry so much about me minding that they throw
themselves into every possible school activity and community activity in order
to show that I am just a normal kid with normal parents who can do normal
things. (And of course they can do everything just like 'normal' people -
whatever that word means. But do they have to? Why can't they just be selfish
couch potatoes, like most parents?)
So
yes: I do mind the way they seem to connect onto everything, and into
everything. The problem with my parents is - I am not like them. Sometimes I
feel as if I've come from outer space.
In the final moments of the story, the narrator for the
first time experiences that sense of community that comes naturally to his or
her parents. On the stage at the town's music festival, with guitar in hand and
the decision made to sing an original composition, he or she feels 'as if we're
all somehow connected into the one body. I mean, everyone. Everywhere.'
'Beach
Burial'
by Kenneth Slessor. This can be found online at www.poetryfoundation.org. It can also be
found in many anthologies of poetry, including collections of Slessor's work.
This is one of Slessor's best-known poems. In 1940 Slessor
became Australia's official war poet. In 1942 an important battle was fought at
El Alamein in northern Africa. Many Australian soldiers and sailors died. In
this poem Slessor writes about the sailors from all navies who were drowned in
battle and whose bodies were washed up on the beach.
This is an exploration of the concept of discovery as
exposure. Slessor was always fascinated by the sound qualities of words, and
his use of sound in this poem enhances the sense of exposure. He begins by
describing very quietly the scene:
Softly and humbly to the Gulf of
Arabs
The convoys of dead sailors come
There is a jarring
note with the word 'dead' in the second line. The word 'convoys' has always
been used about ships full of live sailors. But the third line is also soft and
reassuring:
At night they sway and wander in the
waters far under
That line is longer than the preceding ones, and it has an
almost hypnotic rhythm, enhanced by the half-rhyme of 'wander' and 'far under'.
The sailors seem peaceful. So the last line of the stanza is a shock:
But morning rolls them in the foam.
This is exposure - harsh and cruel. They are no longer being
rocked gently by the waves. They are now thrown on to the beach, exposed to the
light of day. Notice how effective 'but' is, with its abrupt sound. If you
substitute 'and' for 'but', the impact is different. When you read the stanza
aloud, the difference in sound between the first three lines and the fourth is
stark. Notice that apart from 'morning' all the words in the last line are
monosyllabic, so that we read them quickly, with that hard cold sound of
'rolls' and 'foam'.
The poem then goes on to describe the hurried and anonymous
burial on the beach, with a series of harsh-sounding words, again mostly monosyllabic:
'pluck', 'bury', 'tread'. The sound of the gunfire is represented by words that
reflect the feelings of that small burial party, rather than an accurate
representation of the shots themselves: 'the
sob and clubbing of the gunfire'. The colour of the writing on the temporary
wooden crosses is described as being 'As blue as drowned men’s lips',
reminding us again of the exposure of the bodies on the shore.
This is obviously a very different exploration of the
idea of discovery than in texts about personal self-discovery or about
geographical or scientific discoveries. But it is a valid exploration of the
concept. The persona - the voice that the poet uses - is discovering the horror
of war, and the cruel way that the bodies are exposed on the beach encapsulates
that horror. The last stanza tries to offer some kind of comfort, with the idea
that all the dead are honoured together, regardless of which side they were on:
... the sand joins them together,
Enlisted on the other front.
Some readers
find this ending rather flat and disappointing. It is the exposure we remember,
not the perhaps rather glib conclusion.
Book
by John Agard, illustrated by Neil Packer. Walker Books,
2014. ISBN 9780744544787. 141 pp.
Hardcover.
This little non-fiction text is a history of written
communication, from the Sumerians five thousand years ago to the e-books of
today. What makes it especially appealing is that it comes to us as
autobiography: 'My name is Book and I'll tell you the story of my life ...' The
text is concise, just enough information to enable us to understand each major
stage in the development of Book, and it is ably supported by the quirky
illustrations and the use of various quotations and extracts. My favourite is
from Ibrahim Muteferrika (c. 1674-1745), an Hungarian-born scholar and diplomat
of the Ottoman Empire, who wrote about the invention of the printing press:
The
famine of books will be at an end. All nations will be able to acquire books at
low cost. What glory for our Empire, and what prayers for its perpetuity will
be made, when they see so many good books which communicate knowledge to them,
of which till then they had been destitute. This motive alone should suffice
for our invincible Emperor to protect and permit the establishment of printing.
This is a great text for Discovery. Like many non-fiction
texts, its subject-matter is the process of discovery. It traces the many inventions,
experimentations and findings through the centuries that gave humanity better
means of written communication. In the account, many discoverers are celebrated,
such as the Chinese scholar Ts'ai Lun two thousand years ago, who experimented
until he invented paper, to the German Friedrich Koenig in 1814, who invented a
new press powered by steam. Most of these discoveries are of the kind described
by the Board of Studies' rubric as emerging 'from a process of deliberate and
careful planning'. It would be hard to think of anything more powerfully 'far-reaching
and transformative for the individual and for broader society' than access to
the written word.
This text is also a process of discovery for the reader,
enlightening us to the possibilities of presenting a non-fiction text in an
unconventional way. This is a delightfully charming and imaginative approach to
the subject-matter, which could have been long, dull and tedious. From the
decision to tell the story in the voice of Book, to the quirky illustrations
and accessible page layout, to the inclusion of Agard's own poem about
libraries, this is a joy - as we encounter and explore each new idea.
The
Boy in the Striped Pyjamas
by John
Boyne. Definitions, 2014 (2006). ISBN 9781909531192. 272 pp.
This was first published in hardcover
with a dust jacket. The blurb on the dust jacket provided less information than
I had ever seen before, for any book:
Usually we give
some clues about the book on the jacket, but in this case we think that would
spoil the reading of the book. We think it is important that you start to read
without knowing what it is about.
Adults will immediately get some clues to
the subject-matter from the title and the design of the book jacket, although
young readers may not immediately pick up these clues. Other clues unroll
gradually: the nine-year-old narrator thinks that his parents' important
visitor is called ‘the Fury’ and that his father has been sent to supervise a
place called 'Out-With'. Readers who know the history of Germany in World War
II and of the Holocaust will pick up on clues more quickly, but even the most
innocent of readers will share Gretel's discomfort looking at the people behind
the huge wire fence topped by barbed wire tangled in spirals. The reading of
this text is a process of discovery - a gradual, piece-by-piece connecting of
small clues to reveal the whole. For each reader, depending on their prior
knowledge, the process will vary, as the Board's rubric suggests.
The other discovery is the terrible shock
of the ending, as readers realise what Bruno's decision to slip under the wire
will lead to. It is important to remember that Boyne called his novel 'a fable'
- something designed to teach a lesson. There has been a huge amount of
Holocaust literature, most of it autobiographical accounts. Sadly, many readers
have reached a position of fatigue: we know about the horror but we have been
so exposed that it no longer shocks us. Boyne found a way of breaking through
our resistance and shocking us profoundly, forcing us to confront anew the
human tragedy. His novel is, in the words of the Board's rubric, 'confronting
and provocative', offering 'new understandings and renewed perceptions'.
The film rather
than the novel could of course be used as a text for Discovery.
Coraline:
The graphic novel
based on the novel by Neil Gaiman, adapted and illustrated
by P. Craig Russell. Bloomsbury, 2008. ISBN 9780747594062. 192 pp.
This is based on Gaiman's scary novel for children. There is
also an animated film.
Coraline and her parents have moved to a new house. It is a
very large house and Coraline's parents only own a part of it, with other
people living in other parts of the building. It is the school holidays,
Coraline is bored, and she sets out to explore. It is a great place for
discoveries, as both the house and the garden are huge and there are forbidden
and dangerous places, such as the disused well.
Coraline discovers a door that leads her to an apartment
that is the mirror image of the one that her parents own. There she discovers a
couple who look rather like her parents, apart from their button eyes. They
offer Coraline a much more interesting world - better food, new toys, but she
is suspicious, especially when they want to give her button eyes like theirs: 'Coraline
knew that when grown-ups told you something wouldn't hurt it almost always
did.' But when she returns to her
apartment, her real parents have vanished. Gradually, Coraline realises that
her fake mother has imprisoned them.
This horror/fantasy is in many ways a celebration of a
child's impulse to explore, to discover, to embark on adventures. Coraline
discovers in herself a courage she did not know that she possessed as she works
out how she can free her parents and the other lost souls in her fake mother's
control.
Dragonquest
by Allan Baillie and Wayne Harris. Walker Books, 2012
(1996). ISBN 9781921977848. 40 pp.
We all know about quests and how
they work. They are undertaken by heroes, warriors, knights. They involve:
Bold deeds,
deeds so daring that songs
will be sung for a thousand years.
The knight is accompanied by a
page whose job is to 'carry my lance, my shield, my stewpot'. The reader
empathises with the page, as we set out to find and slay the last dragon. There
are of course all kinds of fearsome ordeals to be overcome along the way,
including the 'howling of doomed Dragon Fighters' who have been captured by
witchcraft in the forest. But, after surviving everything, at the moment when
the Dragon Fighter is preparing for a mighty battle, the page reveals that he
doesn't want to kill the last dragon.
This is an example of the pictures
in a picture book revealing a story that is not told by the words. On the top
of Glass Mountain the Dragon Fighter searches in vain for the last dragon and
decides at last that there is 'No dragon left anywhere'. The reader shares the
page's delighted discovery of the truth.
This is a picture book to be
enjoyed by young readers. It is a great and daring adventure, with a surprise
to be discovered at the end. It is also an interesting exploration of a boy's
journey towards manhood. In the traditional quest, manhood is proven by killing
the dragon. In Baillie's version, there is a recognition that it is more heroic
not to kill. The reader makes that discovery as we share the boy's triumphant
grin.
Emma
by Jane Austen. Penguin Classics, 2003 (1815). ISBN
97801439587. 512 pp.
This novel is
out of copyright and there are ebook versions that can be downloaded free.
This classic British novel, first published in 1815, is
thought by many Jane Austen readers to be her best book. It is of course a
substantial read, but you may find that it repays you for the time and effort
expended. This is a novel of self-discovery. Self-discovery is presented as a
series of painful realisations.
The novel opens like this:
Emma Woodhouse, handsome, clever,
and rich, with a comfortable home and happy disposition, seemed to unite some
of the best blessings of existence; and had lived nearly twenty-one years in
the world with very little to distress or vex her.
That sounds
great: we would all like to be handsome, clever and rich, and we would all like
to have lives that are virtually untroubled. But with Austen, every word
counts, and the important word in that sentence is 'seemed'. Emma is surrounded
by people who are not only less clever than she is, but who are in many cases
really not very bright at all, so she has come to over-estimate her own ability
to judge situations. In particular, she flatters herself that, not only can she
predict, but that she is even able to influence, romantic pairings in her small
circle. She arrogantly dismisses warnings, especially from her long-time friend
and neighbour, Mr Knightley, that she is misreading people's behaviour. The
result is a series of embarrassing and hurtful discoveries, culminating in the
sudden recognition that she may have engineered the very worst of
relationships:
‘Have you any idea of Mr Knightley’s returning your affection?’
‘Yes,’ replied Harriet modestly, but not fearfully – ‘I must say that I
have.’
Emma’s eyes were instantly withdrawn; and she sat silently meditating,
in a fixed attitude, for a few minutes. A few minutes were sufficient for
making her acquainted with her own heart. A mind like hers, once opening to
suspicion, made rapid progress. She touched – she admitted – she acknowledged
the whole truth. Why was it so much worse that Harriet should be in love with
Mr Knightley, than with Frank Churchill? Why was the evil so dreadfully
increased by Harriet’s having some hope of a return? It darted through her,
with the speed of an arrow, that Mr Knightley must marry no one but herself!
Emma is a comedy, so everything turns out well in the end. But it is also a
perceptive exploration of character. The world Emma lives in may be very
different from ours, but we have probably all known people like her: confident,
intelligent people who are blind to their own failings. The novel is a process
of self-discovery.
For those who
really enjoy Austen's writing style, there are other discoveries in Emma. As you know, one of the most
important tasks for a storywriter is exposition: providing us with the details
of who? and when? and what? is happening. One device that Austen uses to do
this is through an apparently minor character, Miss Bates. Miss Bates is
probably the least bright of the people who move in Emma's circle: a
well-intentioned, kind-hearted, but undeniably silly old spinster who never
stops talking. One crucial scene in the novel is the ball. Austen uses an
extraordinarily skilful monologue by Miss Bates to provide the exposition.
Notice the way in which Miss Bates' distracted thoughts are represented by the
broken sentences and the string of exclamations:
As the door opened she was heard,
'So very obliging of you! - No rain at all. Nothing to signify. I do not
care for myself. Quite thick shoes. And Jane declares - Well! - (as soon as she
was within the door) Well! This is brilliant indeed! - This is admirable! -
Excellently contrived, upon my word. Nothing wanting. Could not have imagined
it. - So well lighted up! - Jane, Jane, look! - did you ever see any thing? Oh!
Mr Weston,you really have had Aladdin's lamp.
This continues
for some time. It all seems like trivia, typical of Miss Bates' incessant
chatter, but it tells us quite a lot, not just that the old hall has been
transformed into a splendid well-lit ballroom, filling up as she speaks with a
large number of people whom she names as she sees them. She lets us know that
there is 'a noble fire' in the fireplace and that refreshments are being
served, but her monologue also reveals that Mr Knightley has gone out of his
way to be kind to Miss Bates' niece, Jane, as has Mr Frank Churchill - the
romantic lead at this point. Emma has refused to believe that either man is at
all interested in Jane. Miss Bates' apparently rambling monologue is used to
provide the reader with clues - with discoveries - that Emma should also pick
up on but can't see because of her arrogance.
Emma
directed by Jim O'Hanlon. 2009. Rated G.
This lively film presents Austen's
classic to a new generation. This is much more a love story than a costume
drama, with viewers able to get to know Mr Knightley much more thoroughly than
Austen allows in the novel. Three of the four episodes end with a confrontation
for Emma. At the end of scene 1, Mr Knightley is angry with her for playing
with the lives of Harriet and Mr Elton as if they are dolls. At the end of
scene 2, Emma desperately rejects her former governess's suggestion that Mr
Knightley might be in love with Jane Fairfax. At the end of scene 3 Emma
scornfully rejects Mr Knightley's view that there is some kind of relationship
between Jane and Frank. There is a recurrent image of Mr Knightley berating
Emma for her blindness: the camera switches between a tearful Emma and Mr
Knightley's retreating back. There is a further recurrent image of Emma looking
at herself in the mirror, with the dawning horror of discovering how mistaken
she has been.
Like the novel, this is a comedy.
Emma's progress towards self-discovery is painful, but the pain is short-lived
and there are no serious consequences. The unfortunate Harriet, who was so
deeply in love with Mr Elton and then with Mr Knightley - all because of Emma's
interference - discovers that she was really in love with Mr Martin all along.
Jane Fairfax, so wounded by Emma's flirting with Frank, gets her deserved
reward. And Emma finally gets her man.
The
Explorers
by Tim Flanagan. Text Classics, 2013 (1998). ISBN 9781921922435. 400 pp.
This is an anthology of extracts from the journals of
navigators and explorers who 'discovered' Australia, beginning in 1606 with the
Dutch navigator, Willem Jansz, who reported that 'vast regions were for the
greater part uncultivated, and certain parts inhabited by savage, cruel, black
barbarians who slew some of our sailors'. In his introduction to the
collection, Flanagan reflects on the nature of this discovery, noting that it
is often thought of as conquest. Cook captured Australia for the king. The explorers
who went out to discover what lay beyond the original small settlements were
also conquerors, opening up the land for further invasion. Flanagan argues
that:
It
is one of the great ironies of the classic age of exploration that, by its end,
the sum of human knowledge about Australia had been diminished. In 1817 it was
still possible to find somebody, somewhere, who could tell in detail about
their society, the animals, plants and history of their particular part of
Australia.
However, as the explorers spread out making their
'discoveries', pushing out the original inhabitants, that knowledge was lost. This
was despite the fact that many of them recognised that it was only with
Indigenous help that they could manage. David Carnegie, for example, at the end
of the nineteenth century can only survive the Gibson Desert by capturing a
native woman and forcing her to show him where the waterholes are. He justifies
his harsh treatment as necessary because, without her help:
...
we could not by any possibility have succeeded in crossing the desert, and
should not only have lost our own lives, but possibly those of others who would
have made search for us after.
Our journeys of discovery led to ignorance and
incomprehension. Flanagan has concerns about the process of discovering a land
that was so well-known to its inhabitants and the refusal of those discoverers
to listen to or learn from people they considered inferior. Flanagan believes
that we are only now beginning to explore this continent, to discover what it
is really like.
Whether we agree with Flanagan in his introduction or not,
his collection of stories of discovery is fascinating, and the motives and
outcomes of the many eyewitness accounts he presents are hugely diverse. There
are many different kinds of 'discovery', from Banks' first sighting of a
kangaroo - 'an animal as large as a greyhound, of a mouse colour and very
swift', to John Oxley's unearthing of a ceremonial grave, to Leichhardt's appreciation
of the wells dug by the Indigenous people to capture the precarious supply of
water. Some discoveries were sudden and unexpected; others were the result of
careful planning. Some were motivated by curiosity, others by necessity and
some by wonder. But in many cases the cultural and historical values of the
discoverers prevented them from achieving new understandings.
The Fault in Our Stars
by John Green. Penguin Books,
2012. ISBN 9780143567592. 313 pp.
Narrated by sixteen-year-old
Hazel, who has been living with incurable cancer for more than three years,
this is a compulsive read. The narrative voice is hugely appealing: this is a
very bright and very funny girl who knows the inevitability of her fate and is
determined not to be maudlin. Her greatest concern is for her parents: she
describes herself as a 'grenade' that will some day explode, destroying their
lives.
There have been a number of
excellent young adult books in recent years about teenagers facing death, but
this is in a class of its own. It is unrelentingly realistic about the nature
of illness - and the sometimes worse nature of treatment. Hazel's thyroid
cancer has spread to her lungs and, although a wonder drug has stopped the
tumours growing for a while, she needs an oxygen tank to breathe - something
that accompanies her everywhere. Not surprisingly, she has very little energy
and her appearance has been affected by her treatment, particularly the bloated
cheeks caused by steroids. Hazel describes herself as 'a normally proportioned person
with a balloon for a head'. She's hardly the usual heroine of an achingly
tender love story.
The title, of course, comes from
Cassius's words to Brutus in Julius
Caesar: 'The fault, dear Brutus, is not in our stars/But in ourselves...'
The Romans believed they could overcome their fate, but the lives of Hazel and
Augustus are more like another Shakespeare quotation - 'As boys to wanton
flies/ Are we to the gods/ They kill us for their sport.' They are doomed to be
'star-crossed lovers', like Romeo and Juliet. Courageous fighting makes no
difference. What happens seems cruelly arbitrary.
In an interesting sub-plot, Hazel
is determined to find out more about her favourite book, An Imperial Affliction, by American-Dutch author Peter van Houten.
Her journey to Amsterdam, with Augustus, to discover van Houten is a reminder
that not all discoveries are welcome. Green explores the interesting idea that
readers refuse to accept that fiction is not real. The Amsterdam sequence
allows the introduction of another young person whose fault was in her stars:
Anne Frank.
Like many good narratives, this is
a journey of discovery for the reader. From the opening pages, we know that
Hazel is terminally ill. We make predictions as we read and we assume that we
know where the story is going. What happens is a terrible shock.
Students could also use the film
based on this novel as a text to explore Discovery.
The
Fiftieth Gate
by Mark Raphael Baker. HarperCollins, 1997. ISBN 9780732258047. 339 pp.
The sub-title of Baker's
book is 'A Journey through Memory'. This is part-biography, part-autobiography
and part-memoir. It is also very explicitly about the process of historical
discovery. Baker, an historian specialising in modern Jewish history, sets out
to discover his parents' stories. They, as Holocaust survivors, set out reluctantly
to rediscover their own pasts.
In the first chapters Baker
and his brother have taken their parents back to Poland, to the villages they
lived in sixty years earlier. In Chapter 1 their father is at first bewildered
that he can recognise nothing until a wooden gate triggers memories. In Chapter
2 their mother dances over the fields that her father had once owned. In Chapter
3 Baker alone visits Treblinka, the concentration camp where his father's
mother perished. In Chapter 4 he begins the process of recording on tape many,
many hours of interviews with his parents. This gradual uncovering of the past
is extremely effective: the reader participates in the journey of discovery,
which has many of the elements of a detective story. Baker's decision to tell
the story as a process of discovery makes it at times a little confusing, as he
moves so suddenly in time and space, but there are some intensely moving
revelations that reward the effort.
First
Contact
hosted by Ray Martin and produced by Blackfella Films. 2014.
Rated M.
First televised in November 2014, this three-part
documentary is reality TV modelled on the successful Go Back to Where You Came From, which is one of the prescribed
texts for Area of Study: Discovery. Of course, if you are studying Go Back to Where You Came From, you will
not choose First Contact as a related
text, as it is best to have related texts that are of a different text type
from your prescribed text, but other students will find this a good choice.
The documentary is presented by well-known journalist Ray
Martin. Six Australians were selected who had little knowledge of Indigenous
Australia. Initial interviews with the six participants revealed not only
ignorance but prejudice and racism in some cases. The documentary is 'a journey
of conflict and discovery': the purpose is to immerse the six participants in
Indigenous life and to observe how the experiences change their attitudes and
beliefs. The three episodes take the participants to very different communities
across Australia. The third episode was followed by Insight, the SBS current affairs program, where five of the six
participants were questioned about what they had discovered.
The subject-matter of the documentary is clearly discovery:
each participant is exposed to 'new worlds' and 'new ideas', in the words of
the Board's rubric. The discoveries are unquestionably 'confronting and
provocative'. The exposure leads in most cases to 'new understandings'. This
is, however, an artificial voyage of discovery in some ways, manipulated by the
producers of the documentary. It is reality TV and the parameters of the
process of discovering are strictly controlled. It is the producers who
determine which experiences the participants will have. The discovery is
'carefully planned', but not like a scientific experiment where the purpose of
the planning is to ensure an objective result: the purpose here is to create
good television. The sequence, for example, showing the reaction to the killing
of the turtle for food made good television footage, with the outrage and
disgust of the non-indigenous spectators. It did very little to address any
real questions about the relationship between Indigenous people and the land
that provides them with their food.
'Five
Visions of Captain Cook'
by Kenneth Slessor. This can be found online at www.poetryfoundation.org. It can also be
found in many anthologies of poetry, including collections of Slessor's work.
Kenneth Slessor
is one of Australia's best-known and most accessible poets, and 'Five Visions
of Captain Cook' is one of his greatest achievements. It is actually made up of
five very different poems – five points of view on Captain Cook and his
achievements. Each of the five poems has a different format as well as a
different viewpoint.
Part I, the longest and, in my opinion, the best of the
poems shows Cook through the
eyes of his sailors. To them Cook is a king, wielding magical powers - 'more
like warlocks than a humble man', 'Daemons in periwigs'. The poem is dense with
words and images that have connotations to do with magic and sorcery. Cook
lived in an age where there was little scientific support for navigators going
into uncharted waters, so to his men Cook becomes a figure larger than life.
Cook's greatness as a discoverer is emphasised towards the end of this first poem
when Cook has to make a choice - a choice that adventurers before him,
including Tasman and Bougainville, had not made - to choose 'a passage into the
dark' by sailing westwards into the unknown.
Part II
continues the image of Cook as a magician in the sailors' eyes, as he steers
them with confidence through the beauty and the danger of the Great Barrier
Reef.
Part III is the shortest of the five poems, with a
distinctive regular rhythm and a simple aa-bb
rhyme scheme. This is a
picture of Cook as a scientific pioneer. In his cabin are two experimental
chronometers - one invented by a man called Arnold and the other by a man
called Kendal. Despite the sailors' view that his discoveries were the result
of magical powers, Cook knew how important scientific discoveries could be to
opening up the world.
Part IV offers a very different image of Cook, this time seen as an ordinary human being through
the eyes of one of his young midshipmen. Midshipmen at the time were usually quite
young boys, 'hungry schoolboys', but they were trainee officers and were
allowed glimpses of Cook the man, whereas the humble sailors only saw Cook as a
godlike figure, above ordinary men. That man is still the discoverer, mapping
the coast from the jollyboat.
Part V is very different. Cook is now dead and he is seen through the eyes of
one of his sailors, now old, blind and disregarded.
If you want to choose just one of the five poems to examine
the way Slessor explores the concept of discovery, Parts I and III are probably
the best choices.
Forget Me Not
by Tom Holloway. Currency
Plays, 2013. ISBN 9780868199696. 80 pp.
The language of this recent
Australian play is a bit confronting but appropriate to the context. The play
tells the terrible story of a child taken from Liverpool in the United Kingdom when
he was aged three and sent with many other children to a new life in Australia.
It is based on detailed research about the more than 3 000 children who were shipped
to Australia as orphans between the end of World War II and 1970. Gerry, now
around 60, has always believed he was an orphan. He was brought up in a brutal
Australian institution and was severely damaged by the experience. His life has
been unhappy and often violent. It is his daughter, Sally, who insists that he contacts
the authorities and tries to find out who he is.
The play is non-realistic
in style and is not arranged chronologically. The most gripping scenes are
those between an inarticulate Gerry and the frail old woman, Mary. It is a
while before we discover that Mary is, in fact, Gerry's mother, mourning for
the child she gave up because she was persuaded by the authorities that he
would go to a better life. It takes even longer to realise that the scenes
between Gerry and Mary are imagined. By the time Gerry and Sally get to
Liverpool, Mary is dead.
I try as often as possible
not to disclose endings, so I apologise for that. However, I don't think it
will spoil your appreciation of the play.
This is about Gerry's
painful discovery of his past. It is a discovery of the whole history of the
forgotten children. But, because it is not chronological and because it is not
always realistic narrative, it is also a gradual process of discovery for
audience members as we try to piece together fragments of evidence about
Gerry's past and about Mary. It is in some ways discovery as detection.
Girls Don’t Fly
by Kristen Chandler. Penguin
Books, 2011. ISBN 9780143566588. 300 pp.
This American young adult novel
looks like a conventional teenage romance: nice girl gets dumped by glamorous
and apparently perfect boyfriend and slowly comes to realise he was a sleaze
and that Mr Right is someone who doesn’t fit any of the stereotypes. And it is that – and more satisfying than most.
But it is so much more. To begin with, the characters are richly drawn and
engaging and the first-person narrative voice is funny and intelligent. The
representation of Myra’s large and chaotic family is a joy: Myra comes to
acknowledge that she is a doormat and that she is mercilessly exploited by her
family, but there is a lot of love there as well. But most interesting is
Myra’s growing awareness of her physical environment and her growing
fascination with the Galapagos Islands, especially their birdlife.
The setting is ‘the pit of
Utah’, the dreariness of suburbia at its worst. Myra can only see the boredom,
the small-mindedness and the ugliness. But slowly a science project and a young
researcher, Pete, begin to open her eyes to the miracle of the Great Salt Lake
only ten miles away, a stopover for millions of migrating birds.
The novel is a celebration of
the fact that girls don’t need to settle for second best. Myra had been intending
to train as a dental nurse, to complement her perfect boyfriend’s career
intention to become a dentist. It is only after he cruelly dumps her that she
recognises the possibility of competing with him on equal terms, when the
opportunity presents itself of attempting to win a scientific scholarship that
involves two months’ pre-college research in the Galapagos. The novel also
celebrates the joy of scientific discovery. The chapter titles are all taken
from the world of bird study: ‘Habitat’, ‘Mounted specimen’, ‘Cavity nests’
and so on.
This is a satisfying
coming-of-age novel - a novel of self-discovery for the protagonist - as well
as being a novel about the joy of scientific discovery.
Great
Expectations
by Charles Dickens. Penguin Classics, 2004 (1861). ISBN
9780141439563. 544 pp.
This novel is
out of copyright and there are ebook versions that can be downloaded free.
This is a very
big book and, for readers used to twenty-first century literature, it can take
a while to get used to. Paragraphs and sentences are much longer than in modern
writing, and there are some unfamiliar words. But if you can take the time to
become accustomed to it, Dickens' writing can be an utter joy. He was hugely
popular in his time. His novels - most of which were published in serial form -
made him a celebrity. He had the kind of audience appeal that a film director
like Steven Spielberg has had in modern times.
Great Expectations is a coming-of-age story. We first meet Pip as a
young child, an orphan, living with his unsympathetic and much older sister,
Mrs Joe, and her husband, Joe Gargery, the blacksmith. It is Joe who gives Pip
the only love and affection in his life. It is taken for granted that Pip will
become Joe's apprentice once he is old enough and that he will lead the same
kind of hard working-class life.
But,
unexpectedly, a benefactor comes along, who will turn Pip into a 'gentleman'.
Pip will be educated and will be provided with an allowance that will ensure
that he won't need to work for his living. This, of course, means leaving Joe
and Mrs Joe and going to London, where Pip soon learns to despise his humble
origins. Pip is very confident that he knows who his secret benefactor is and
looks forward happily to the day when all will be disclosed.
But the
disclosure - the discovery - is terrible:
I could
not have spoken one word, though it had been to save my life. I stood, with a
hand on the chair-back and a hand on my breast, where I seemed to be
suffocating, - I stood so, looking wildly at him, until I grasped at the chair,
when the room began to surge and turn. He caught me, drew me to the sofa, put
me up against the cushions, and bent on one knee before me, bringing the face
that I now well remembered, and that I shuddered at, very near to mine.
The discovery brings not the
expected joy, but revulsion. The pain and shock will eventually lead Pip on a
journey of self-discovery, as in all good coming-of-age novels.
The Importance of Being Earnest
by Oscar Wilde. Penguin, 2012
(1895). ISBN 9780451531896.
A play in three acts.
This play is
out of copyright and there are ebook versions that can be downloaded free.
Like most
genres, the nature of farce varies enormously - from some very vulgar examples
dependent mainly on physical jokes to the superbly sophisticated, verbally
adroit wit of Wilde's best-loved play. Common to all farce on stage and film
is, however, the concept of discovery: usually the sudden - often embarrassing
- reveal, whether it's someone concealed behind the sofa or the awkwardness of
Jack in full mourning suit confronting (supposedly) the brother whom he has
just pronounced dead. The best part of discovery in farce is that the audience
is usually in the know. Dramatic irony provides the frisson.
One of the
favourite techniques of the farce is to exploit mistaken identity, and it is
this that Wilde sustains throughout the play with such poise. The play is
always about how important it is to be named 'Ernest'. For the reader or
audience member, the delight consists in the absurdly comic situations that
arise as mistaken identity is revealed.
What Wilde adds
to what might otherwise be a fairly stereotyped treatment of rogues
deliberately disguising their identities and being uncovered is his wonderful
cynicism, exemplified at the end of the play when Jack - now, at last, Ernest -
apologises to Gwendolen:
Jack: Gwendolen, it is a terrible
thing for a man to find out suddenly that all his life he has been speaking
nothing but the truth. Can you forgive me?
Gwendolen: I can. For I feel that
you are sure to change.
Farces depend
on the absurd and the wildly exaggerated, and this is as true for plot as for
any other aspect of a play. The final revelation that it was the unlikely Miss
Prism who deposited the black handbag in the cloak-room at Victoria Station,
Brighton line, is deliciously right, especially when Jack assumes that she must
be his long-lost mother.
The most recent
film version of The Importance of Being
Earnest was made in 2002, directed by Oliver Parker. It had a star cast –
Rupert Everett, Colin Firth, Frances O’Connor and Reece Witherspoon playing the
roles of the two pairs of lovers, with Dame Judi Dench perfect in the role of
Lady Bracknell. It had moderate box-office success. Watch the official trailer
to see if this is a film that may appeal to you. If you do watch it, you won't
have difficulty discovering how important discoveries are to the comedy.
Other farces
could be used to explore Discovery. Any episode of the famous television comedy
series Fawlty Towers would be a good
place to start.
The
Interrogation of Ashala Wolf
by Ambelin Kwaymullina. Walker Books. 2012.
ISBN 9781921720086. 395 pp.
This is Book 1 of The Tribe. Book 2, The
Disappearance of Ember Crow (9781921720093), was published in 2014.
This is absorbing post-apocalyptic
fiction. Set many centuries into the future, after humanity was almost wiped
out in an environmental catastrophe, this - like many other titles in the genre
- is set in an authoritarian society where those that do not conform are
eliminated. In this case, the misfits are teenagers who begin to develop
'abilities'. These abilities are powerful and diverse, covering such things as
the ability to create storms, earthquakes or fire, to fly, to communicate
telepathically or - in the case of the main character, Ashala Wolf - to
sleepwalk. Some teenagers manage to escape. Ashala has become leader of The
Tribe, a group of teenagers living in the Firstwood. The Tribe want to end the
tyranny that threatens them.
The
Interrogation of Ashala Wolf
is breathtakingly exciting, as Ashala is captured by the enforcers and
interrogated by the Machine. There are several totally unexpected and audacious
plot twists: nothing is what it seems. The action is confined almost entirely
to one location - Detention Centre 3 - and takes place over just a few days.
The effect is intense and almost claustrophobic.
The author comes from the Palyku people of the Pilbara
region. What sets The Tribe aside
from the many other recent young adult post-apocalyptic novels is the author's
decision to draw on her heritage. An adaptation of the Dreamtime legend of the
rainbow serpent is an important part of the narrative. Ashala seeks advice from
her ancestral spirit, the giant Serpent. The Aboriginal understanding of country
also underpins the story. Ashala values and feels herself to be part of the
Firstwood and its giant tuart trees.
This is a story about discovery - Ashala discovers that
things are very different from what she had believed. Her discoveries are
sudden and confronting. But reading The
Interrogation of Ashala Wolf is also a journey of discovery for the reader.
The author deliberately misleads us, so that the plot reversals come as a series
of shocks.
The Invention of Lying
directed by Ricky Gervais and
Matthew Robertson. 2009. Rated M.
This little British comedy was no
huge box office success, but it is great fun and absolutely perfect to explore
the Area of Study: Discovery. It stars Ricky Gervais as a fat loser with no
assets or talents, except for the fact that he is a really nice, caring human
being - something that doesn't rate highly in his world. It is a world that is
much like ours, except that human beings have never learnt to lie. The concept
of a lie is completely unknown. Not only are there no big lies, but all those
little white lies that are so essential to ordinary human civility are also
impossible. A woman says to the mother of a newborn: 'Your baby is so ugly;
it's just like a little rat.' The television ad for Coco-Cola is delivered by
an employee of the company who can think of no greater inducement than to beg
his audience to keep buying Coke so that he can keep his job. He's already
admitted that Coke contributes to obesity in both adults and children and, when
he takes a sip at the end of the ad, he shudders and admits that it's too
sugary. The ad for Pepsi on the side of the bus spruiks: 'Pepsi - when they
don't have Coke.' And the nursing home where the protagonist visits his elderly
mother is signposted: 'A very sad place for hopeless old people.'
Ricky Gervais plays Mark Bellison,
an unsuccessful scriptwriter for a leading film company. Mark is fired by his
boss and is about to be evicted by his landlord. He knows there are
insufficient funds in his bank account to pay his rent. When the bank teller
asks him how much he wishes to withdraw, he has an epiphany - a eureka! moment
- represented in an over-the-top fashion with sudden extreme camera zoom in to
his forehead and then to his brain. He lies - and his world is changed forever.
This is the 'sudden and unexpected' discovery of the Board of Studies' rubric
leading to 'new worlds and values'.
The world of the film up until
that moment of discovery has no deceit, no flattery and also no fiction. The
company Mark worked for was called Lecture Films, producing totally factual and
mind-numbingly boring accounts of moments in history. The invention of lying
allows Mark to tell fictional stories. He tells his former boss that he has
woken in the desert to discover - 'one of the best discoveries man has ever
discovered' - a half-buried chest containing an ancient manuscript. The story,
set at the beginning of the year 1400, contains giant flying spaceships, robot
dinosaurs and nude alien Amazonian women. Gervais is having fun with the idea
that the ability to lie is at the heart of all fiction.
Lying, however, also brings
trouble. Mark is at the bedside of his dying mother. She is terrified that she
is facing 'an eternity of nothingness'. So he lies, telling her that she will
go to a beautiful place where she will be surrounded by everyone she has ever
loved and where she will have her own mansion - for eternity. The doctor and
the nurses in the room are blown away by this revelation. Within hours, the
whole world is clamouring to know what Mark knows about death. He becomes a
modern-day Moses delivering ten important facts, on tablets made from pizza
boxes - truths that have been handed down to him by The Man in the Sky. This is
a terrific spoof on the concept of discovery as prophetic revelation. Some
viewers may find it offensive.
The film uses exaggeration to
achieve its humour. Mark's former colleagues gathered in the boss' s office to
listen to the story he 'discovered' are gobsmacked, as are the people in the
crowd outside his house as he delivers the message from The Man in the Sky. The
musical score is used to good effect, soaring from time to time as if to
suggest that something momentous has happened, contrasting starkly with the
sheer absurdity of the situation. But the most commonly used technique is the
use of an extreme close-up on Gervais's face, as he expresses dawning
comprehension, astonishment, delight and apprehension.
The second half of the film, which
develops the love story and the role of Mark as everyman hero, is fine but much
less interesting than the beginning for the exploration of the concept of
discovery.
This is a great choice as a
related text for Discovery as it explores the concept of discovery in several
ways: discovery as a sudden, unexpected eureka! moment; that moment leading to
the invention of a new way of living; the mythical unearthing of a treasure
from the past; and the discovery
delivered by way of prophetic revelation. It's almost as if the film had been
created especially for the NSW Area of Study.
It's
a Book
by Lane Smith. Walker Books, 2010. ISBN 97819217220147. 32
pp. Hardcover.
This is a
children’s picture book for all ages. It can be read with quite young children,
who will enjoy the joke that Jackass, with his tablet under his arm, does not
understand Monkey's book that doesn’t text, tweet, wi-fi or make noises. The story shows, however, that Monkey's book
is impossible to put down; we see Jackass absorbed, refusing to give it back as
the clock ticks on. And no wonder: in a wonderful double-page spread we
discover that Monkey's book is an illustrated version of Treasure Island, one of the best children's books of all time.
Stevenson's ability to use words to evoke the reader's imagination is what
makes his book so compelling, despite the 'limitations' of the medium.
Young children will enjoy Jackass's discovery. Older readers
read It's a Book as a celebration of
the enduring appeal of an old-fashioned medium that relies so heavily on the
power of human language. The words of a great writer allow us to discover a
world that is, in the words of the Board's rubric, 'transformative'.
Liar
by Justine Larbalestier. Allen & Unwin, 2011 (2009).
ISBN 9781742375380. 349 pp.
Young adult literature in recent times has been flooded with
vampires, werewolves, zombies, mermaids and sirens, pixies, elves and a host of
other paranormal creatures, usually against a setting of an American high
school and involving a good deal of sexual tension. So the presence of such a
creature in this novel is perhaps no surprise – although I have no intention of
disclosing which kind of creature as I don’t want to spoil the shock that the
reader experiences.
This doesn’t, however, follow the formula. And it’s narrated
by a self-confessed total liar. So can the paranormal presence even be
believed?
No one who has read this will ever be in doubt about what
the term ‘unreliable narrator’ means. The narrator tells us on the first page
that she is – or has been - a liar, but promises that from now on she will tell
the truth:
I
was born with a light covering of fur.
After
three days it had all fallen off, but the damage was done. My mother stopped
trusting my father because it was a family condition he had not told her about.
One of many omissions and lies.
My
father is a liar and so am I.
But
I'm going to stop. I have to stop.
I
will tell you my story and I will tell it straight.
No
lies, no omissions.
That's
my promise.
This
time I truly mean it.
The book is divided into three sections: Part One: Telling
the Truth; Part Two: Telling the True Truth; Part Three: The Actual Real Truth.
Worse, halfway through the book we come across a chapter heading: 'Lie Number
One'. Following chapter headings include: 'Lie Number Nine', and then later:
I
think maybe lying to you about Jordan was one lie too many. (Ten lies too many?
A thousand?)
But
there was a reason for it.
Forearmed is forewarned, supposedly: there is no way we are
going to believe the stories of a self-confessed liar, is there?
This fast-moving tale is both fascinating and frustrating.
The author is a master of manipulation. OK, any reader might be tricked once –
but to fall into the same trap a second time? And can I possibly accept ‘the
actual real truth’ in the end – although it seems so ‘true’?
This is a very clever, beautifully crafted plot.
This is a great text for
Discovery. Many kinds of narrative are about the process of discovery for the
reader. In this case, it is a kind of detection, a slow reveal, as we assemble
the facts and try to evaluate them in an endeavour to determine the truth. The
problem is that our only source of information - the only way we can discover
anything - is through the narrator, who has admitted on the first page that she
is notoriously unreliable. Both the narrator and the author are playing a game
with us, the readers; we struggle to discover the truth.
Longitude
directed by Charles Sturridge. 2000. Rated M.
This is a two-part television movie, starring Michael Gambon and Jeremy
Irons as two discoverers two hundred years apart. Gambon plays the role of the
real historical figure John Harrison, an eighteenth-century carpenter with a
keen interest in mathematics who believes he can solve the problem of how
longitude can be determined at sea - a crucial discovery in navigation. Over a
period of more than fifty years, he struggles against the prejudices of
academics and the conservatism of the Navy to have his invention tested and
recognised - and to receive the huge prize that had been promised during the
reign of Queen Anne. In a parallel story, Jeremy Irons plays another real
person, Rupert Gould, who served in the British Navy in World War I. He was
fascinated by horology and set out to restore Harrison's original machines.
The film is long - two hours - and will not appeal to all student
audiences, but for those interested in the processes of scientific knowledge it
has a lot to offer. It is also informative about the cruel, confined and
unhealthy life of sailors in the Age of Sail. The film begins dramatically with
the hanging, in 1707, of a common sailor who had dared to question the
Admiral's view of where the ships were positioned. In a telling scene, as the
body twists in the wind outside the Great Cabin, all the Admiral's officers
wisely agree with him. The result is 2 000 sailors drowned off the Scilly
Islands, and Queen Anne's offer of a reward.
The parallel stories detail the long, slow, painful process of
discovery. Harrison not only devotes his entire life to his quest for a device
that will allow navigators to accurately calculate their position, but he
enlists to the search as well his son William, who as a young child manages to
get a hearing for his father that had previously been denied. Interspersed with
the Harrisons' story is that of Gould, emotionally damaged from his wartime
experience and obsessed with John Harrison's machines - at great cost to his
personal life. Both Harrison and Gould endure constant prejudice and ignorance.
The Board's rubric refers to discoveries that 'emerge from a process of
deliberate and careful planning', but that only partly covers the process of
discovering on John Harrison's part. Sometimes progress is a matter of luck; at
one stage he makes what is described as 'a daring and lateral leap' in the
process. What the film emphasises is that the process can be very long and very
difficult, a matter of overcoming one obstacle after the other. The result is
the production of 'ideas that can change our lives'.
It would be interesting for students to consider why the director,
Charles Sturridge, chose to tell the history of the invention of a chronometer
through the parallel stories. It is Gould who often explains to the viewer how
Harrison's machines worked or what problems he confronted - issues that would
have been more difficult to deal with if the parallel story had not been
included.
Looking
for Alibrandi
by Melina Marchetta. Puffin, 1992. ISBN 9780140360462. 292 pp.
This coming-of-age novel has become an
Australian young adult classic. Many Australian young people empathise with
Josie's struggle to discover to what extent she is Italian, despite the fact
that both she and her mother were born in Australia. She resents in many ways
the restrictions placed on her by her Italian grandmother and the wider Italian
community, who can be relied upon to report back to her grandmother anything
she does. At the end of the novel Josie is able to say:
If someone comes up and asks me what nationality I am,
I'll look at them and say that I'm an Australian with Italian blood flowing
rapidly through my veins. I'll say that with pride, because it's pride that I
feel.
Looking
for Alibrandi is also about Josie's discovery of the father,
Michael Andretti, she has never known. When she asks her mother what he looks
like, she replies: 'He looks like a male Josephine Alibrandi.' Josie feels sick
at the idea of meeting him, but at the same time desperately wants to. When she
does meet him, they are hostile to each other and declare that they want to
have nothing to do with each other. But an incident at school that threatens
her with expulsion leads to Josie impulsively contacting him for help. The
scene is very satisfying: Josie and Michael defeat the bully who called her a
wog and the bully's bullying father. The end of the scene - the end of Chapter
8 - is a discovery for Josie:
I walked past my class-mates with Michael Andretti
beside me and for a few minutes I knew how it felt walking alongside one's
father.
It was a great feeling.
At the end of this novel of self-discovery Josie
realises that all of life is about discovery: 'I want to keep on learning
truths till the day I die.'
Luke's
Way of Looking
by Nadia Wheatley and Matt Ottley. Walker Books, 2012
(1999). 40 pp.
'All
the boys in Mr Barraclough's class saw things the same way ... except for Luke,
who looked at things differently.'
Mr
Barraclough's Friday afternoon art classes are a nightmare for Luke. When he
chooses to draw a blue apple, when everyone else in the class paints either a
red or a green apple, Mr Barraclough yells at him and the other boys think he
is weird. Matt Ottley shows a dejected Luke in front of his easel, with the
shadow of a gesticulating and yelling Mr Barraclough on the wall - a monster.
One Friday afternoon, unable to bear the thought of another art lesson, Luke
skips school. He gets off the bus in front of 'a building that looked like an
ancient palace'. There, in a gallery of modern art, Luke for the first time
discovers people who see the world they way he does. Ottley pictures Luke
wandering delightedly through the displays until, bursting with happiness, he
seems to be flying into a large, joyous, Jackson-Pollock-type painting.
This
is the story of Luke's triumphant self-discovery. The reading of the picture
book is also a journey of discovery as the reader explores Luke's view of the
world.
Mrs
Sen's
by Jhumpa Lahiri. From Interpreter
of Maladies, Flamingo, 2000. ISBN 9780006551799.
Although
this short story is told in the third-person, our view of the world is from the
point of view of eleven-year-old Eliot, who has had a series of short-term
after-school babysitters. His newest babysitter, Mrs Sens, is the wife of an
Indian professor at an American university. Because she does not drive, he goes
to her place each afternoon and watches her prepare the evening meal. Mrs Sens
is recently married. It has been an arranged marriage and she barely knows her
husband. She is mourning the extended family with whom she used to share
household tasks and is being challenged by new demands, such as the need to
learn to drive when she has always been used to a household chauffeur.
This
story is really about what makes a home. Eliot realises when Mrs Sens speaks of
home 'she meant India, not the apartment where she sat chopping vegetables' - a
place where she used to chop vegetables with a wide circle of happily gossiping
women. She wonders if, in this new place, if she suddenly screamed at the top of
her lungs, whether anyone would hear. Eliot, wise beyond his years, suspects
not: 'But they might complain that you were making too much noise.'
This
is an intensely moving story about loneliness and the absence of love, but its
power depends on never directly expressing the feelings of the two characters.
It is through the little mundane details of their daily lives that we discover
how they feel. Eliot, musing on the meaning of 'home', thinks about the last
time he and his mother spent a day at home together. It was Labor Day and the
neighbours were having a noisy party, to which Eliot and his mother were not
invited. '... they didn't go anywhere. She did the laundry, and balanced the
checkbook, and, with Eliot's help, vacuumed the inside of the car.' It is
depressingly dreary.
For
the reader, this story is a wonderful journey of discovery of character, as the
tiny details of their lives are revealed. In just 24 pages we come to know
Eliot and Mrs Sens intimately and to share their sadness.
'My
Last Duchess'
by Robert Browning. This can be found online at www.poetryfoundation.org. It has also been included in
many poetry anthologies, including anthologies for schools and anthologies that
offer an historical overview of English poetry.
Browning's poem is one of the most famous examples of the
use of the dramatic monologue form in poetry. Like the novelist Mohsin Hamid in
The Reluctant Fundamentalist,
Browning in 'My Last Duchess' has created for us a voice who speaks to us
directly, creating for us the sense of time and place as he does so, as well as
a growing revelation of events that have occurred in the past and that are
occurring as he speaks.
The dramatic monologue form is a great choice for a writer
who wants readers to discover the situation gradually, piece by piece. At the
beginning of the poem, we are told that it takes place in Ferrara in Italy. And
then we hear the Duke's voice, speaking as if he is in the middle of a
conversation with us:
That’s my last Duchess painted on
the wall,
Looking as if she were alive.
We are there in the room with him, as he shows us the
painting. He invites us to sit down so that we can view the painting at our
leisure:
Will’t please you sit and look at
her?
We discover that the painting is usually covered with a
curtain, but he has drawn that aside so that we can appreciate the painting -
and the beauty of his dead wife. As he talks about the way his young wife
interacted with the painter, and the way she interacted with others, we
discover the Duke's bitter jealousy, until we come to the terrible lines:
...
I gave commands;
Then all smiles stopped together.
A little later,
we realise that he is about to negotiate with another nobleman whose young
daughter will become his next wife. As he invites us to descend to meet him, he
casually points to another treasure in his expensive art gallery.
It is the use
of the dramatic monologue that allows the reader to so successfully discover
this chilling story of a man whose sense of entitlement includes the power of
life and death over his wife.
My
Place
by Sally Morgan. Fremantle Press, 1988. ISBN 9780949206312.
384 pp.
This Australian autobiography was a ground-breaking work,
one of the first that allowed the world to hear the voices of Indigenous
Australians telling their own stories - stories that had been hidden or
ignored. It was significant, too, because the stories are told so well. This is
often more like reading a novel than an autobiography: the people come to life
like well-drawn characters and the story is intriguing, constantly changing and
often very funny.
The author grew up in the 1950s and 1960s in a working-class
suburb of Perth believing that she was of Indian heritage, although her mother
and grandmother would never tell her or her siblings anything about their past
lives or about their supposed Indian heritage. It is younger sister Jill, more
attuned to people around her than Sally the dreamer, who first realises that
they are almost certainly of Aboriginal heritage. She has been called that ugly
word 'boong' at school. Jill thinks that it is probably best not to know the
truth, as discrimination and prejudice against Australia's indigenous people were
so strong at the time, but Sally eventually is determined to discover the
stories of her mother and her grandmother and, at the same time, her own
heritage.
The voyage of discovery is long and hard. Mother and
grandmother are reluctant to talk because they are deeply suspicious of the
authorities and are terrified that their children might be taken from them. Sally's
mother begs her to leave the past buried because 'it won't hurt anyone then.' Sally's
grandmother in particular is obsessive about keeping out of the way of
bureaucrats. Sally argues that secrets have already hurt all of them and that
discovery - uncovering the past - is essential for healing.
One of the interesting features of the book is Sally's
discovery - followed by her sister Jill - of her own Aboriginality. This is at
times difficult and painful. Authorities, for example, accuse her of having
wrongfully applied for an Indigenous scholarship. She is warned (correctly)
that publishing her book will lead to personal attacks. This is discovery as
self-discovery - the recognition by Sally and Jill of their identity.
Eventually their mother shares that self-discovery:
To think I nearly
missed all this. All my life, I’ve only been half a person. I don’t think I
really realized how much of me was missing until I came North.
My
Place is in many ways also discovery as detective story. Sally has
to piece together her family's stories. It was the story of her grandmother's
brother, Arthur, that she uncovers first. Knowing that he has not long to live,
Arthur spends long hours with Sally recording his memories, which she
eventually transcribes. They are published as a separate section within the
book. Eventually, she is able to record as well her mother's story and then,
more briefly, her grandmother's: her grandmother is insistent that she will
take some secrets to the grave.
Past
the Shallows
by Favel Parett. Hachette, 2013 (2011). ISBN 978073363049.
320 pp.
This is a compulsive read. It is the story of three
brothers, Joe, Miles and Harry, and their difficult relationship with an angry
and brutal father. It is set on the remote south coast of Tasmania, where the
boys' father makes a precarious living as an abalone fisherman. Perhaps the
major character is the sea: a wild, dangerous and threatening sea that is both
an exhilarating challenge for the older boys when they are surfing and an
indomitable power that takes the lives of fishermen.
The narration is third-person limited. We move between the
viewpoint of the enchanting nine-year-old Harry, an innocent narrator, and that
of his fourteen-year-old brother Miles, who tries to protect Harry from his
father's wrath. At the beginning of the story Miles is reluctantly helping his
father on the boat during school holidays but an accident to a crewman means
that Miles will have to work full-time in the job he hates so much, alongside
his irrational father. While other abalone fishermen make very good livings,
Dad is a failure who, in desperation, fishes illegal grounds.
Older brother Joe has had to leave home after Dad broke his
arm. Harry is left on his own for many hours a day while Miles and Dad are away
at sea. He builds a relationship with a mysterious recluse, whose gentleness
and care contrast sharply with his father's neglect and violence.
At the heart of the story is a dreadful secret from the
past. The sudden discovery of the secret from the past is pivotal - to the
plot, to the characters' understanding of themselves and each other and to the
reader's appreciation.
Paula
by Isabel Allende. HarperCollins, 2005. ISBN 9780007205257. 384 pp.
By the time Isabel Allende came to write Paula, she was a famous
novelist, published in many languages worldwide. Paula, her daughter, was twenty-eight
when she became gravely ill and fell into a coma, from which she never
awakened. Sitting beside her daughter's bedside, first in a hospital in Madrid and
then later at home in California, Allende writes a long letter to Paula in
which she thinks back over their lives and the lives of their extended
families. She begins the letter intending to tell Paula a story, 'so that when
you wake up you won't feel so lost'. The letter becomes a memoir, a journey of
self-discovery, in which Allende explores her own feelings about her past. Like
all of us, she has played many roles. Faced with the greatest grief she has
ever known, she no longer knows who she is.
The memoir works so well because Allende is a superb storyteller, and
because she has a fascinating story to tell. Her family history is anything but
typical, growing up in the home of a wealthy and eccentric grandfather in Chile
after the collapse of her parents' marriage. As the niece of President Salvador
Allende, who died after a military coup to depose him, she is eventually forced
into exile. The stories she tells of her own life and of the lives of her
family members are warm, funny, heartbreaking. They culminate in the
extraordinary epilogue when she realises that she must let her daughter go. As
she holds her dying daughter in her arms, she makes a great spiritual
discovery:
I am the void, I am everything that exists, I am in
every leaf of the forest, in every drop of the dew, in every particle of ash
carried by the stream, I am Paula and I am also Isabel, I am nothing and all
other things in this life and other lives, immortal.
The Reluctant Fundamentalist
by Mohsin Hamid.
Penguin Books, 2008 (2007). ISBN 9780141029542. 209 pp.
This adult novel is quite
short and a fairly easy read, but the ideas explored are, in the words of the
Board's rubric 'confronting' and 'provocative'. The whole novel is a dramatic
monologue. That means it is entirely in the voice of one person who is speaking
to the reader directly, like an actor on a stage directly addressing the
audience. In a dramatic monologue we not only hear the voice of the speaker -
and only of the speaker - but that voice creates for us a scene, like a play on
a stage, where we observe things happening. In The Reluctant Fundamentalist the speaker is a young Pakistani,
Changez, who has spent a lot of time in the United States where he had great
success, first as a student and then as a businessman. But 9/11 changed
everything for him. Here he is in a cafe in Lahore, talking to a stranger. Over
the course of the afternoon and evening we learn his story, as he tells it to
the stranger. We never hear the stranger directly, although we can guess at
some of what he says and what he does from the narrator’s comments. The
stranger is probably an American, possibly a military type, and he becomes an
increasingly sinister figure as the afternoon progresses. Is it a wallet or
perhaps a gun that he reaches for from time to time in his inside coat pocket?
What is his purpose there in Lahore? The tension mounts, climaxing in a violent
but ambiguous ending.
The dramatic
monologue is one of the most effective choices for a writer who wants the
reader to make a gradual discovery. As we hear the speaker's voice, we learn
more and more about the situation - although, in this case, we never discover exactly
what happens at the end. Different readers come to different conclusions, as
the rubric suggests, according to our contexts and values. But The Reluctant Fundamentalist is also
about a self-discovery on the part of the speaker: a sudden, shocking
self-discovery. Changez had enthusiastically embraced the West and had had
great success there. At the time of 9/11 he is working in a prestigious job for
an American business. He is on business in Manila when he turns on his
television:
I stared as one – and then the other – of the twin
towers of New York’s World Trade Center collapsed. And then I smiled. Yes,
despicable as it may sound, my initial reaction was to be remarkably pleased.
When Changez reveals this reaction in the cafe in
Lahore, he notices the American clench his fist. He tries to explain. He is not
a psychopath who glories in the deaths of innocent people:
But at that moment, my thoughts were not with the
victims of the attack … no, I was caught up in the symbolism of it all, the
fact that someone had so visibly brought America to its knees.
That is a huge moment of self-discovery for Changez.
It is a shock, too, for the reader, who has been impressed with Changez's
civility and sophistication. Again, readers react differently to this
discovery, depending on their contexts and values. While some find Changez's
discovery offensive, the novel forces the reader to go beyond easy black-and-white
judgments about international tensions and some of their underlying causes. For
many readers, the process of discovery will include 'new understandings', a
re-evaluation of their own views.
Rules of Summer
by
Shaun Tan. Lothian, 2013. ISBN 9780734410672. 48 pp. Hardcover. Also available
as an app.
This
is an intriguing picture book for all ages from Australia's most-awarded
creator of picture books. Like all of Tan's work, it repays constant
re-reading: each time you pick up the book you go on a journey of rediscovery. It
is summer time and two little boys are free to roam and have adventures. The
voice we hear in the minimal text is that of the younger brother who is
discovering 'the rules', as laid down by the older brother - rules that are
often arbitrary and bizarre: 'Never leave a red sock on the clothesline',
'Never step on a snail', 'Never forget the password'. All the rules begin with
'never' until almost the end of the book, where there are some that begin with
'always', including the best advice of all: 'Always know the way home'. The
brothers' world is full of bizarre creatures and scary monsters. Older brother
finds younger brother annoying and does a deal with one of the ever-present
black crows that leads to him being imprisoned in an odd bunker, but the older
boy relents fairly soon and comes to the little brother's rescue, which leads
to another rule: 'Always bring bolt cutters'.
Most
readers report that they find the book puzzling but it also resonates
emotionally with them and they want to read and re-read, discover and
re-discover. Tan is exploring the relationship between siblings - the shared
experiences, the tensions, the intensity of emotions, and ultimately the
strength of the bond; most of us can relate to that. He sets his story in a
landscape that has both the familiarity of suburbia and the strangeness of
nightmare. As the little brother discovers 'the rules' and the older brother
discovers a sense of protectiveness, the reader explores a range of meanings.
Tan
has published his book as an app which allows even more discoveries for the
reader. With the app it is possible to zoom in and out of Tan's extraordinary
paintings, to discover detail that simply can't be detected in the printed book
form. The soundtrack on the app also enhances the reader's experience.
Scurvy:
How a Surgeon, a Mariner and a Gentleman Solved the Greatest Medical Mystery of
the Age of Sail
by Stephen R. Bown. Penguin, 2004 (2003). ISBN 9780143002642. 288 pp.
This non-fiction text is
ultimately about the discovery of scientific method: in the words of the Board
of Studies' rubric, 'a process of deliberate and careful planning evoked by
curiosity, necessity or wonder' and a process built on the progressive
discoveries of those who have gone before. But it is also set in one of the
greatest ages of discovery - the time of the epic voyages that opened up the
world and that were 'far-reaching and transformative'.
This great age of discovery
was the Age of Sail, covering the time period from Columbus's voyages across
the Atlantic at the end of the fifteenth century to the adaptation of steam
power to ship engines in the mid-nineteenth century. Many of the great voyages
of discovery of the time were hampered or even ruined by a disease that was
particularly common in sailors on long voyages: scurvy. At a time when sea
voyages were fraught with dangers of all kinds, more sailors - perhaps as many
as two million - died of scurvy than from all other causes combined, such as
shipwreck, storms, battle and piracy. Bown has set out to tell the story of the
discovery of a cure for the deadly disease.
Bown singles out three
figures as significant in the eventual discovery of a way of dealing with
scurvy: a surgeon James Lind, the mariner and sea captain James Cook, and a
gentleman physician Sir Gilbert Blane. What these three very different people
had in common was an interest in scientific method. The discovery of a cure for
scurvy was continually blocked by so-called scientists and medical men who saw
the world through theoretical frameworks that caused them to overlook empirical
evidence:
In the quest for a universal theory of
disease, much common sense was thrown aside and replaced with learned
posturing. People, then as now, are inclined to dismiss trifling
inconsistencies in their pet theories when they faithfully believe them to be
correct - and perhaps more dangerous and malignant, when they believe a
reputation is at stake or money is to be made. Folk wisdom has it that what we
wish to be true, we readily believe. Whether this is universally applicable is
debatable, but it must have played a role in the centuries-long saga to define
and cure scurvy.
That paragraph can't help
but make the modern reader think of the current controversy about climate
change.
Bown has written an
accessible and interesting account of the search for an understanding of scurvy.
But, as indicated above, this is not just a history of the discovery of a cure
for scurvy; it is the story of the discovery of scientific method. This history
is often the story of how discovery can be blocked by competing interests, by prejudices
and by preconceived theories. Lind, for example, failed to correctly read the
results of his own experiments because he felt that his medical peers would
only respect his findings if they fitted into a theory that provided a
foundation for an understanding of all human illnesses. Cook's remarkable
success in keeping his sailors free of scurvy was overlooked by an Admiralty
preoccupied with war. It took Blane to discover what he called: 'the practical
benefits of progressive knowledge', based on the analyses of those who have
gone before.
Like all good discoverers,
Bown provides his evidence: an appendix listing the most common foods of the
time and their vitamin C content; a timeline; chapter-by-chapter notes on his
sources and further reading; and a bibliography.
Silas
Marner
by George Eliot. Penguin Classics, 2004 (1861). ISBN
9780141439754. 272 pp.
This novel is
out of copyright and there are ebook versions that can be downloaded free.
If you would
like to consider a classic nineteenth century novel as a related text, Silas Marner might be a good choice. It
is much shorter than most novels of the period, and it is a heart-warming story
of a life transformed - by a sudden, unexpected discovery. It is set in a small
rural community in England. Silas Marner is an outsider, although he has lived
just outside the village for fifteen years and has supplied local families with
the linen he weaves. Marner is not only an outsider; he is a bitter man, having
been betrayed unjustly by his best friend in the tightly-knit church group to
which he had formerly belonged. In his fifteen years in the village, Silas has
worked hard at his weaving but has made no friendships. His only joy is the
gold coins that he accumulates from his work: he has become a miser to whom it
is the gold itself, not what he might buy with it, that has become precious. His
one comfort is to take out his gold at night and to count it. But one dreadful
night he comes home from delivering some linen to find that he has been robbed
- all his gold has gone.
George Eliot
builds a picture of a man who is as cut off from humanity as is possible while
still living alongside others. Silas is a shrunken, miserable figure. Then
another night changes everything. He sees something gleaming in front of his
fireplace. He is very short-sighted from the long hours of close work on the
loom and can't see clearly what is there, but his heart has leapt, because he
thinks his gold has been returned as miraculously as it disappeared:
He leaned forward at last, and
stretched forth his hand; but instead of the hard coin with the familiar
resisting outline, his fingers encountered soft warm curls. In utter amazement,
Silas fell on his knees and bent his head low to examine the marvel: it was a
sleeping child – a round, fair thing, with soft yellow rings all over its head.
The child's mother is found dead in the snow; no one
has any idea of who the father might be or where the child has come from. Silas
makes the extraordinary decision to keep and raise the child as his own. The
discovery of the child is utterly transformative:
... as her life unfolded, his soul,
long stupefied in a cold narrow prison, was unfolding too, and trembling
gradually into full consciousness.
There are of course more discoveries to come. Little girls
with golden hair, even if they appear mysteriously on the hearth of a lonely,
sad, almost broken man, come from somewhere: they have histories and
connections, and those histories and connections are slowly uncovered -
discovered - in the course of the story.
Reading nineteenth-century novels is fairly hard work at
first, but many readers find Silas Marner
very rewarding.
Sounds Spooky
by
Christopher Cheng, illustrated by Sarah Davis. Random House Australia, 2011. ISBN
9781864718805. 32 pp.
This
is an excellent example of a picture book in which the pictures tell a story
that the words do not reveal. A little girl is listening to the spooky sounds
of the night, constantly reassuring herself that she is not scared: 'What's
that noise that I can hear? I'm not scared.' The book is full of noises,
expressed with lovely, scary onomatopeoic words. We assume from the words that
the little girl has found herself in a haunted house full of spooky noises. The
pictures confirm that this is in fact a haunted house, but they also allow us
to discover that nothing else is as we had assumed. It is the scared little
girl who is the ghost, a ghost from the distant past when an influenza epidemic
swept the world after World War I. The scary noises are being made by three (live)
children from the present who have broken into the house and are timidly
exploring it.
Because this is a picture book for quite young readers, it
may not have quite enough substance to be a good related text, but it is
certainly an example of the joy of discovery for readers of picture books when
the words and the pictures contradict each other.
Stormbreaker:
The graphic novel
based on the novel by Anthony Horowitz, adapted by Antony
Johnston, illustrated by Kanako Damerum and Yuzuru Takasaki. Walker Books,
2006. ISBN 9781844281114. 144 pp.
Stormbreaker
was the first volume in Anthony Horowitz's very successful Alex Rider series, about a teenager who is reluctantly conscripted
by MI6 to be a spy. It exists as both a children's novel and as a film, but
this graphic novel version is an interesting text to look at for the way in
which readers make discoveries. An important part of the exposition at the
beginning of Alex's story is the backstory about his uncle, with whom Alex has
lived since his parents died. Alex has always believed that his uncle was an
international banker leading a respectable and rather dull life. In reality,
his uncle has been a spy, undertaking extremely dangerous missions. In the graphic
novel, the reader makes the discovery of this background in a prelude. The
setting is Alex's school, where he is asked to make a speech to the class about
his family. Alex begins to explain that he lives with his uncle who is away a
lot on business. The next frame has a speech balloon saying: 'He's got a really
boring job', but the graphic has the
huge 'Boom!' of an explosion and a figure on a motorbike racing away, with two
bikes in pursuit. The next frame has Alex explaining that his uncle is a bank
supervisor, over a graphic of the motorbike rider kicking in the stomach a
fearsome figure with a very large gun. The following three frames are back to
Alex in the classroom, and then we see more of the violence that is actually
happening in Alex's uncle's life in a sequence in which we no longer have
Alex's speech balloons but only pictures of action and violence. Towards the
end of the prelude the story switches between Alex on his way home from school
and his uncle in a car, as the uncle rings Alex and promises to be home soon.
The pictures tell us that that won't be possible, with the last two pages in
shocking black and red.
Antony Johnston, who adapted Horowitz's novel to the graphic
novel format, has skilfully used the discrepancy between the story told by the
speech balloons and the story told by the graphics to uncover the background
story for the reader. At the end of the prelude, the pictures alone reveal that
Alex's uncle has been violently killed.
The Sweetest Fig
by
Chris Van Allsburg. Andersen Press, 1993. ISBN 9780862644987. 32 pp.
This picture
book by the famous American illustrator, Chris Van Allsburg, is a modern fairy
tale with a shock discovery at the end. Monsieur Bibot, the dentist, is cold and selfish.
He mistreats his dog, Marcel, and is
cruel to his patients. When an old lady comes to him with toothache, he rips
out the tooth without anaesthetic but promises her painkillers. She confesses
that she can't pay him in money, but she has two special figs that can makes
his dreams come true. But he is angry and refuses to give her the painkillers.
He does, however, eat one of the figs. Next morning, walking the dog, he finds
himself in the street without his clothes on - and realises, with shock, that
that was what he had dreamed the previous night. Convinced now that the
remaining fig will make a dream come true, he spends night after night trying
to dream about money, and mansions, and yachts - determined to dream about
wealth so that he will become the wealthiest man on earth. At last he is ready
to eat the fig. But as he turns away from the table 'he heard the crash of
breaking china. He turned to see Marcel standing on a chair with his front paws
on the table, chewing the last of the fig.'
As in all good fairy
tales, the ending is sweet - and a shock discovery. The final picture offers no
clues: we see (apparently) Monsieur Bibot being mean as usual to Marcel. The
reader needs to read the text carefully to discover that dreams do indeed come
true.
This
is Not My Hat
by Jon Klassen. Candlewick Press, 2012. ISBN 9780763655990.
40 pp. Hardcover.
This
is a picture book that delights quite young children. There is minimal text and
the story is told mainly by the images. A cheeky little fish speaks directly to
the reader. He boasts that he has stolen the cute little hat that he is wearing
from a much larger fish who was asleep at the time and knows nothing of the
theft. The little fish is heading for the thick sea grasses so that he can
hide.
The discovery that the reader makes - and that causes a
frisson of delight and a little fear in children - is that the little fish’s narrative is contradicted by the pictures. The
tiniest details, such as the shape of the big fish’s eye, tell us all that we
need to know. We discover - as the little fish does not - that right at the
beginning the big fish was not asleep, as the little fish thought. We discover,
as the little fish has not, that not only is the big fish awake but that he is
in pursuit of the thief. We discover from the pictures that the crab who
promised not to tell where the little fish is going to hide has encountered the
big fish. As the little fish disappears cheerfully to hide among the plants
that are 'big and tall and close together', the reader discovers from the
pictures that the big fish is very close behind. In the last two openings
(double-page spreads) the reader discovers all we need to know.
Because this is written for such young readers, it may not
be the best choice as a related text, but it is certainly an excellent example
of a picture book where the printed words and the illustrations contradict each
other. It is a wonderfully successful process of discovery for its intended
audience.
The
Truman Show
directed by Peter Weir. 1998. Rated PG.
It's amazing watching this film to realise that it predated reality TV
as we know it, when it is such a marvellous satire on - among other things -
the audience that watches such shows. Jim Carrey is perfect in the role of an
unwitting insurance salesman in a near-perfect world that is not at all what it
seems. I never watched this as an innocent viewer - I knew when I first saw it
the premise behind the show - and it would be interesting to know when an
uninitiated viewer would first suspect that it is a false world. Surely the
fact that it is all so beautifully clean and bright would suggest something
unusual. Presumably the original viewers were like the protagonist, gradually
discovering discrepancies that lead them to question.
Truman Burbank is, in fact, the first human being to have been adopted
by a corporation. The picturesque town of Seahaven, where he lives, is a giant
movie set enclosed in a geodesic dome. His parents, his wife, his friends, his
fellow employees and his neighbours are all actors playing roles. Even when
Truman first suspects that something is wrong, he assumes that for some reason
he is under surveillance. It is a long time before he discovers the huge extent
of the deception.
While the film is often treated as a light-hearted comedy, the
undertones are quite dark. Christof, the director of The Truman Show,
calls himself the Creator and claims to have invented for Truman a better world
than the real one, but the motive is entirely profit-driven. When Truman
threatens to escape, Christof does not hesitate to try to kill him.
This is a journey of discovery for the protagonist but also for the
viewer, as we are progressively provided with quite shocking views of Truman's
life: through the lens of cameramen or on the television screens of devoted
viewers.
The Vanishing Moment
by Margaret Wild. Allen
& Unwin, 2013. ISBN 9781743315903. 183 pp.
Set in contemporary Australia, The Vanishing Moment focuses on the lives of two young women whose
fates are transformed by a single significant moment. We follow the stories of
these women in separate chapters. For about a third of the novel, it is not
clear how their lives are connected. There is a third perspective - a man
called Bob who is remembering unhappy childhood experiences. His connection to
the two young women, Arrow and Marika, is even less clear. There is a slow
reveal, as gradually pieces of the puzzle come together. Wild has constructed
an intriguing plot that keeps the reader turning the pages until the
heart-wrenching, sudden and unexpected resolution.
Bob's story is about the past, leading to homelessness and
gaol. Arrow's story is about the present, although her present is influenced
strongly by a terrible trauma in her past. Marika's story is completely in the
present. Her happy and successful life has been shattered by one single
shocking moment.
Arrow and Marika are engaging characters with whom readers
identify. Arrow, who has recently finished school, is just a little younger
than Marika, who has been immersed in a tertiary-level art course for a couple
of years. Both are bright, personable and attractive, but they become paralysed
by sudden misfortune: in both their lives an unexpected and unforeseeable
moment has changed everything. Both girls have loving and supportive families
but the trauma each experiences causes great strain on family relationships.
The coincidence of their meeting leads to a friendship that promises to bring
healing to them both, until the shock of the climax of the novel.
The novel explores the way in which a moment in time can
change lives. Margaret Wild also raises the possibility that there may be
multiple universes and that it may be possible to choose, at a significant
moment, to live an alternate life. The difficulty, as the novel reveals, is
that there is no way of knowing whether that alternate life would be better.
This young adult Australian novel is all about discovery:
both the gradual uncovering of the past and the sudden, unexpected shock of
realising how different strands tie together.
'Vici'
by Naomi Novik. Available in The Dragon Book edited by Jack Dann
and Gardner Dozois. ISBN 9781742753607.
Also available online at http://www.fantasy-magazine.com/new/new-fiction/vici.
Naomi Novik is the author of the highly successful fantasy
series, Temeraire, an alternative
history of the Napoleonic Wars where dragons are used as very effective
weapons, carrying teams of sharp-shooters into battle. While this idea may seem
fantastic, it is very convincing in the Temeraire
series. Novik's dragons are extraordinary characters, as are the dedicated
warriors who both care for them and who ride them into war.
In this story, commissioned for this anthology of dragon
stories, Novik is in many ways writing an outrageous spoof of her own work. Her
setting is Ancient Rome and her protagonist is, according to the magistrate
before whom he is appearing, 'a licentious and disreputable young man'. Antony
tries wisecracking his way through the court hearing but it does him no good.
The magistrate can't sentence him to fight to his death in the arena, as he is
the son of a Roman Senator, but instead his punishment is to go out and kill a
dragon that is terrorising a village in the north. This, of course, is meant to
be a death sentence: it takes at least twelve men to kill a dragon.
For the reader 'Vici' is a series of discoveries, all absurd
but wonderful fun. Antony not only accidentally kills his dragon and captures
its treasure but he finds the dragon egg. When eventually the egg hatches, the
baby dragon (as is the nature of dragons in Novik's world) immediately bonds
with the first thing it sees: Antony. Antony now has a rapidly growing, ravenously
hungry and totally devoted dragon. He calls it 'Vici'. But keeping a dragon in
central Rome becomes a bit of a problem and the same magistrate sends Antony
and Vici off to Gaul, where a war is being fought.
The resolution of the story, where a delighted Caesar
realises Vici's potential on the battlefield, is a further absurd discovery. It
was Caesar after all who famously declared: 'Veni. Vidi. Vici' - 'I came. I
saw. I conquered.'
This story has particular resonance for readers who are
familiar with the Temeraire series.
The
Watertower
by Gary Crew and Steven Woolman. Era Publications, 1997
(1994). ISBN 9781863743204. 32 pp.
This was one of
the first highly successful Australian picture book for young adults.
It is sci-fi/fantasy. In a strange country
town, Spike and Bubba climb the hill on a very hot day to cool off in the
watertower. The watertower itself is eerie - dark and deep, but it is the town
itself and its inhabitants that are most unsettling. Everywhere there is a logo
that seems to relate to the watertower. The inhabitants seem to be watching,
perhaps spying on the boys; reflected in the black sunglasses is the image of
the watertower. Text and illustrations work beautifully together as the tension
builds and the story becomes darker. In fact, most of the clues are in the
illustrations, clues that we piece together as we read and re-read in a gradual
process of discovery, as we try to work out what happens to Bubba in the
watertower, and what is different about his eyes at the end of the story.
Some readers
are frustrated that the ending of The
Watertower is unclear but most thoroughly enjoy the creepy mysteriousness
of this picture book and the process of unravelling the details: does a town
like that need a satellite dish quite so big? is that curved series of squares
reminiscent of the viewing window of some kind of spacecraft, especially when
we look through it at the image of the man with the pitchfork? why would a
farmer be carrying a pitchfork in the main street anyway?
We
Were Liars
by E. Lockhart. Allen & Unwin, 2014. ISBN
9781760111069. 225 pp.
This is very contemporary, very compelling and
rather uncomfortable reading. The setting is a private island just off the
coast of Martha's Vineyard, summer playground of America's wealthy aristocracy.
The Sinclair family who have owned the island for generations are the epitome
of the beautiful people: 'The Sinclairs are athletic, tall, and handsome. We
are old-money Democrats. Our smiles are wide, our chins square, and our tennis
serves aggressive.'
And under no circumstances must anything threaten
that beautiful image.
The family have built four substantial homes on the
island - one for parents, Harris and Tipper, and one for each of their married
(and divorced) daughters and their offspring. All family members spend every
summer on the island. There are increasing tensions among the daughters, as it
seems that their trust funds may be inadequate to maintain them in the manner
to which they have become accustomed, but life on the island is paradise for
the children: a group of littlies and the four older children - Cadence,
Johnny, Mirren and the outsider, Gat. To the family, the four older children
are known as the Liars.
Gat, the outsider, first came to the island when the
Liars were all eight. He is the nephew of Ed, boyfriend of the divorced Carrie,
and of Indian heritage - a striking contrast to 'our white, white family'. Of course
they are all too well-bred to be racist, but Gat's otherness becomes a threat
the summer they all turn fifteen, when it is obvious that Cadence - the eldest
of the generation and presumably the heir - is falling in love with Gat. It is
Gat who tells Cadence that to her grandfather, the patriarch, he is Heathcliff:
'There's nothing that Heathcliff can ever do to make these Earnshaws think he's
good enough.'
Cadence is the narrator. Her narration opens a
little before the year in which she will turn seventeen, and we learn
everything in flashback. However, it is confusing flashback, as Cadence has had
a terrible accident that has left her with selective amnesia. She has no memory
of the accident and only flashes of memory of that fifteenth summer.
The novel is very tautly written. The reader is as
eager as Cadence is to find out what it is she cannot remember. The truth, when
it hits us, is deeply, distressingly shocking. This is a novel whose ending
must never be revealed to anyone who has not yet read it.
As well as a structure that so cleverly conceals the
truth - despite the fact that all the clues are there, if we hadn't been too
blind to see them, there is much to admire about the writing. The first-person
narration in Cadence's voice gives us an incisive look at the life of privilege
and the thin veil of normality that must always be kept in place. Cadence
describes emotional situations in extreme terms. She watches her father get
into the Mercedes and drive away, out of her life and her mother's life, and
she explains the pain like this:
Then he pulled out a handgun and shot me in the chest. I was standing on
the lawn and I fell. The bullet hole opened wide and my heart rolled out of my
rib cage and down into a flower bed. Blood gushed automatically from my open
wound,
then
from my eyes,
my
ears,
my
mouth.
It tasted like salt and failure. The bright red shame of being unloved
soaked the grass in front of our house, the bricks of the path, the steps to
the porch. My heart spasmed among the peonies like a trout.
Mummy snapped. She said to get hold of myself.
Be normal, now, she said. Right now, she said.
Because you are. Because you can be.
Don't cause a scene, she told me. Breathe and sit up.
It's a technique that Lockhart uses frequently
through the novel, especially when Cadence is describing the terrible migraines
she suffers as she tries to remember.
The other narrative technique that Lockhart uses
with great effect is the insertion throughout the narrative of versions of a
fairy story about a rich and powerful king with three beautiful daughters.
This is a great text for Discovery. Discovery is
occurring on two levels: you have the process of Candace trying to remember, to
overcome her selective amnesia. That is a process of the slow reveal, as piece
by piece glimpses of that fifteenth summer on the island come back to her. But
there is another process of discovery - that of the reader. We share in
Candace's gradual revelation, but then there is the sudden, terrible shock of
the truth.
WOW thank you so much this is incredible!!!!
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